Is it difficult to find a true friend? What can end friendship?
“Friend” it is only one word but how much sense it contains. This word for me always associates with support, reliability and a big amount of secrets. How difficult is it to find true friends? Is it possible to have a lot of true friends?
    I am convinced that to find even one true friend is almost impossible as nowadays people only think of themselves. It calls selfishness and in real friendship this feeling cannot exist. A true friend should be ready to listen, to support and to keep secrets. A selfish person always wants to say something and never wants to listen to, moreover, she/he recalls you only when she/he is in trouble and wants to get a piece of advice or to take solace in you. When she/he is doing well you become unnecessary and you´re being forgotten, and so it will continue until you get tired of it.  People used to get, get and get, but never give anything back. This “concept” is absolutely doomed to failure and in real friendship it doesn’t work.
    Another established truth is that there is no place for envy in true friendship. It is able to destroy even strong and long-term relationships. Precisely this feeling led to the end of friendship of the two very famous women. Paris Hilton and Kim Kardashian were thick as thieves, since Kim Kardashian became more popular than Paris Hilton they quarreled. Paris Hilton couldn´t stand the fact that she is less popular than her close friend.
    To sum up, it is very difficult to find a true friend, but, first of all, you should start with yourself and to learn how to be a true friend.

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  1. Natalia Eydelman25 мая 2019 г. в 06:02

    Hello Tereza,

    thanks for sharing your essay with us. Its topic is really very important because being a good friend and having good friends are the things that make our lives richer and more varied. You've explained well what being a true friend means and what real friendship is.

    The body of your work is well-organised. However, there are several problems with the introduction and conclusion. First, the thesis statement cannot be a question: check this resource to remember why https://penandthepad.com/can-topic-sentence-thesis-statement-question-1455.html

    Also, your concluding paragraph should be furher developed to make it more memorable. You can use one of the techniques for writing conclusions to do it:

    http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/conclude.html

    Things to remember:
    It calls selfishness > Passive

    should start with yourself and **to (Gr) learn how to be a true friend.

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